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Building The EvilsPain seeps though the facade of a smile
Staring in the eyes of whispering voices
Tears of the forgotten evaporated in lies
The truth in reason does but cry
Merry are the makers of riches
Spoiled to rotten core and plastic flesh
Call out you invisible peoples
You with the cold faces and hollow eyes
The heart is but a pump for blood
And your brains are salted heavily
Smog rolls in and we crawl at ground level
The towers of the rich reach higher
And we falter on this desolate shore
Knowing that heroes exist no more

ThresholdIt's red raindrops in the snow
Still and morbid darkness grow

Behold the mourning gone away
In the shadows come what may

Darken soul and darken heart
Lips of crimson fall apart

In chains of steel forever bound
Beneath the cool and hollow ground

Cross the threshold, cross the sand
Spawn of madness, stronger hand

'Till every day that I behold
Glow and shimmer all in gold

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Mystic TearsTime is abhorrent to reality
Mixed up in some chaotic fatality
Far to brazen to satisfy
Caught in thoughts they mystify
Loss of youth striken pages
Smote by twilight mages
Worldly bound in chains and ties
Hearing the small children's cries
Now hopeless they wander
Their lives left to the gods to ponder
Fate smiles in a twisted way
Long forgotten by this day

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Mystic Tears

by *Jessica-Lorraine-Z, Jan 4, 2011, 11:05:56 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Traditional Fixed Forms

Time is abhorrent to reality
Mixed up in some chaotic fatality
Far to brazen to satisfy
Caught in thoughts they mystify
Loss of youth striken pages
Smote by twilight mages
Worldly bound in chains and ties
Hearing the small children's cries
Now hopeless they wander
Their lives left to the gods to ponder
Fate smiles in a twisted way
Long forgotten by this day

Mystic Tearsby *Jessica-Lorraine-Z

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Traditional Fixed Forms

©2011-2013 *Jessica-Lorraine-Z

MUWHAHAAA!!

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~yruhauntingme Jul 25, 2012

Smote by twilight mages..how the hell does that just roll out of your head?

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*Jessica-Lorraine-Z Jul 25, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Umm.. idk, I'm big on fantasy

hahaha.

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~yruhauntingme Jul 25, 2012

Nah that can't be it. (Magic the card game, Comics, daydreaming of being a superhero)

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*Jessica-Lorraine-Z Jul 26, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

hahaha

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~Lothrian Aug 19, 2011

Beautiful words!

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*Jessica-Lorraine-Z Aug 20, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

very glad you enjoy it ^.^

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~Lothrian Aug 22, 2011

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~Tails02574 May 10, 2011 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

You're a poet, and I didn't even know it. Old joke, I know. xD

But seriously. The rhythm and rhyming are spot on. I can't really do that AND make something sound as good or meaningful. Not in poems anyways

Life is cruel.

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*Jessica-Lorraine-Z May 10, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

Yeah this one is a bit odd, and abstract. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it

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~Tails02574 May 11, 2011 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

No problem. Thanks for sharing <three

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