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New DA ID 2013 by Jessica-Lorraine-Z New DA ID 2013 by Jessica-Lorraine-Z
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This is a tough image to critique because I really like it and it works overall to such a degree that I am really working to find ways it could be better. I think the only thing about it that niggles at my training and eye is the hand. Having it cut off like it is... it's a bit distracting. I would rather seen the whole hand (or at least the whole finger) or just the side of it. The finger is wonky but easily fixed with a slightly different crop (which would likely happen when printed anyway).

I like her look and while I usually prefer my models to look at me for these kinds of shots, the looking away works here quite well. I love the texture of the hoodie too, sometimes these more washed out b&w images can lose that texture but you've retained just enough of it to move it to a higher level. Good job.
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hclausen Featured By Owner Edited Jul 29, 2014
Thank you for the link to The Great Dictator".  I had forgotten this speech.  Needed the lift and the reminder.
From an old hippie, peace and love.

p.s. Lovely gallery.
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Professional General Artist
:heart: Thank you, and I'm glad I could remind you of it. :)
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:iconkangtengri:
KangTengri Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013   Photographer
beautiful fashion style :clap:
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thank you :) Glad you think so ^.^
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:iconkangtengri:
KangTengri Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013   Photographer
your collection of expressions is amazing
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
haha :D Thanks! That's nice of you to say :D
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:iconnooneloveme:
nooneloveme Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Bella!
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thanks ^.^
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:iconnooneloveme:
nooneloveme Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
;)
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:iconkantiki:
Kantiki Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
That is a great hoodie :D ...and great look, framing, capture. Fav+!!!
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thanks :D
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mrorange420 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
This shot is beautiful, mode,l texture of the fabric hoodie. It feels like it could be for an ad from a esquire magazine advertising perfume or Calvin Klien and I mean that in the most respectful way as it feels very profesh.
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much. I'm glad you think so ^.^
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:iconyanickpaquette:
YanickPaquette Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Tres Belle :)
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional General Artist
De Rien.
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:iconjacac:
JACAC Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
i . r e a l l y . l i k e . t o . s e e . y o u . h e r e . i n . t h i s . p o r t r a i t
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
^.^
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:iconjacac:
JACAC Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
:hug:
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:iconde7h1nk13:
De7h1nK13 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful lady!! :3
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
:) Thanks.
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:iconde7h1nk13:
De7h1nK13 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yup:)
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:iconthefallengiant:
thefallengiant Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student General Artist
*stating the obvious*.
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
lol
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:iconlove1008:
love1008 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
:hug:
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
:)
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:iconverbie420:
verbie420 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you kinda look like anne hathaway in this ^_^
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
I get that a lot.
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:iconverbie420:
verbie420 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's definitely a good thing ^_^
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
Glad you think so ^.^
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:iconenricobelmonte:
EnricoBelmonte Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
catchy, classy and soo sticky ... peaches and cream to me :star:
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
:) Glad you dig it ^.^
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:iconrpmgirl:
RPMgirl Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
I like this better than the colored one.
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
Me too, it's why it's my ID :)
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:iconzumbotron:
Zumbotron Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
B&W or colour doesn't matter

this picture is perfect

Congrats on the new ID Jess

<3
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
:D Thanks!
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:iconkingoob:
KINGOOB Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Very nice!
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconkingoob:
KINGOOB Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Anytime my lovely talented friend!
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional General Artist
:giggle:
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:iconkingoob:
KINGOOB Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Nice :D
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:iconyoyo55555:
YoYo55555 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
those eyes and lips...such a deadly combination...very alluring and captivating...
you have the most kissable lips...
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
THanks.
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YoYo55555 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
:)
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909sickle Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
you look so huggable in that sweater =] great choice for DA ID
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
:) Thank you ^.^
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:iconvenom-v13:
Venom-V13 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
Looking more like Anne Hathaway with each cute pic, lol!
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Professional General Artist
lol, what ever!!!
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:iconvenom-v13:
Venom-V13 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Haha, oho so finally i guess you agree right?
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:iconjessica-lorraine-z:
Jessica-Lorraine-Z Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
No, but I'm tired of arguing. :P
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:iconvenom-v13:
Venom-V13 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Lol, you can't fight the fact that you so resemble her like i've been saying? XD
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