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ThresholdIt's red raindrops in the snow
Still and morbid darkness grow

Behold the mourning gone away
In the shadows come what may

Darken soul and darken heart
Lips of crimson fall apart

In chains of steel forever bound
Beneath the cool and hollow ground

Cross the threshold, cross the sand
Spawn of madness, stronger hand

'Till every day that I behold
Glow and shimmer all in gold

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Critique by ~TrueNightStudios Jan 10, 2013, 4:01:55 PM
This is a tough image to critique because I really like it and it works overall to such a degree that I am really working to find ways it could be better. I think the only thing about it that niggles at my training and eye is the hand. Having it cut off like it is... it's a bit distracting. I would rather seen the whole hand (or at least the whole finger) or just the side of it. The finger is wonky but easily fixed with a slightly different crop (which would likely happen when printed anyway).

I like her look and while I usually prefer my models to look at me for these kinds of shots, the looking away works here quite well. I love the texture of the hoodie too, sometimes these more washed out b&w images can lose that texture but you've retained just enough of it to move it to a higher level. Good job.
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*nooneloveme Feb 5, 2013
Bella!
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*Jessica-Lorraine-Z Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^.^
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*nooneloveme Feb 6, 2013
;)
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Mood: Love ~Kantiki Jan 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
That is a great hoodie :D ...and great look, framing, capture. Fav+!!!
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*Jessica-Lorraine-Z Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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~mrorange420 Jan 12, 2013
This shot is beautiful, mode,l texture of the fabric hoodie. It feels like it could be for an ad from a esquire magazine advertising perfume or Calvin Klien and I mean that in the most respectful way as it feels very profesh.
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Mood: Joy *Jessica-Lorraine-Z Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much. I'm glad you think so ^.^
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~YanickPaquette Jan 11, 2013
Tres Belle :)
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*Jessica-Lorraine-Z Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
De Rien.
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Mood: Joy *JACAC Jan 10, 2013
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