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New DA ID 2013 by Jessica-Lorraine-Z New DA ID 2013 by Jessica-Lorraine-Z
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This is a tough image to critique because I really like it and it works overall to such a degree that I am really working to find ways it could be better. I think the only thing about it that niggles at my training and eye is the hand. Having it cut off like it is... it's a bit distracting. I would rather seen the whole hand (or at least the whole finger) or just the side of it. The finger is wonky but easily fixed with a slightly different crop (which would likely happen when printed anyway).

I like her look and while I usually prefer my models to look at me for these kinds of shots, the looking away works here quite well. I love the texture of the hoodie too, sometimes these more washed out b&w images can lose that texture but you've retained just enough of it to move it to a higher level. Good job.
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KangTengri Nov 2, 2013   Photographer
beautiful fashion style :clap:
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Jessica-Lorraine-Z Nov 7, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thank you :) Glad you think so ^.^
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KangTengri Nov 7, 2013   Photographer
your collection of expressions is amazing
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Jessica-Lorraine-Z Nov 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
haha :D Thanks! That's nice of you to say :D
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Jessica-Lorraine-Z Feb 6, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thanks ^.^
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Kantiki Jan 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
That is a great hoodie :D ...and great look, framing, capture. Fav+!!!
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Jessica-Lorraine-Z Jan 30, 2013  Professional General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconmrorange420:
This shot is beautiful, mode,l texture of the fabric hoodie. It feels like it could be for an ad from a esquire magazine advertising perfume or Calvin Klien and I mean that in the most respectful way as it feels very profesh.
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