Pouty Pilot

This is a great photo, and I can only see one place where it could have been improved, that being the addition of light on her helmet, which has lost all its details.

I suggest using a "snout" light at 11 o'clock, shining a few more lumens down onto the helmet and the lower right side of her face. This would also reveal the right side of her neck, which is lost in the dark shadow.

I don't know if having the abovementioned areas dark was in your plan, and if so, I take everyhing back.

Again, overall this is a very good picture.